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About Me Member Antagonist LaughingScarecrow19/Female/Unknown Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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Sun Nov 15, 2009, 9:01 PM
Oh this world... at the risk of sounding cliche, when it rains it pours... My father found out on Thursday that he has tumors on his bladder, he is having surgery to remove them on the 26th and until then all we can do is wait and hope it isn't cancer. It's the waiting that kills me, if I knew it was cancer then I could start to deal with that, find a way to fight against it, whatever... but this waiting... I don't deal well with anticipation. And, as always, it's busy time at school. A paper in both Anthropology classes, a paper in Lit, a paper in Arabic, tests in Art History and Math... My entire Thanksgiving break scheduled for homework... well, at least I still have my humor yes? ;)

It's the Arabic that's going to kill me. A presentation on al-Zabba' prut Amr ibn Tharab ibn Hasan ibn 'Adhina ibn al-Samida', given in Arabic and a paper written on Khālid ibn al-Walīd... written in Arabic of course. Maybe I'll do the presentation on Khālid ibn al-Walīd and my paper on Bat-Zabbai... I just can't decide. And then to decide whether I continue Arabic next semester when I already have so many classes I must take like Kinship and Social Orginization, Geoarchaeology, Medical Anthropology, the History of the African Continent and a sociology course and I'd love to get into the Roman Imperial Art History class... oh so many choices... Oh and the Gothic Literature in America course sounds like a riot.

  • Mood: Bewildered
  • Listening to: My roomate's love song playlist...
  • Reading: Treasure Island
  • Drinking: Sweet Tea

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Searching for destiny in golden beams of light among the pure white spiders that whisper the words of all my triumphs and jaded awards.

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Xibalba
  • Interests: Archaeology, Paleontology, History, Writting, Poetry, Art, Music, Mythology, etc.
  • Favourite movie: Labyrinth, Curse of the Golden Flower, Blade Trinity
  • Favourite band or musician: Within Temptation, Rasputina, Daft Punk, O-Zone, Soundtracks...
  • Favourite genre of music: A little of everything, more or less....
  • Favourite artist: Rembrant, Bottechelli, Raphael...
  • Favourite poet or writer: Poe, Rice, Tolkien, Dumas, etc.
  • MP3 player of choice: zen stone
  • Favourite cartoon character: Scarecrow
  • Personal Quote: People who are afraid of the dark are clearly not aware of what the light is capable of.

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:iconabyssusregina:
Hey, I saw the x-man drawings you did for your friend Kita, I was wondering if you would be amazing and draw some pictures for my x-man fan fic?

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:iconlaughingscarecrow:
Sure, just send me a message with a fairly detailed description of what you want/who you want and any reference pics you'd like me to consider. Also, I'd love some back story, both for my entertainment and to try to bring some personality into the characters.

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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
:iconalycya:
thanks for the fav =]

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The twenty-first century is when everything changes. And you gotta be ready.
:iconlaughingscarecrow:
Sure thing.

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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
:iconlaughingscarecrow:
You're very welcome, it's a great photo.

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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
:iconbmjewell:
:thanks: Thanks for the :+favlove:! I appreciate it! :heart:

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:iconeman-resu:
Thanks for the :+fav: for McSame!

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emaN-resU... I KNOW I've seen that name somewhere...
:iconlaughingscarecrow:
You're welcome, it's a good statement.

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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
:iconsminkyalc:
Thanks for the +fav!

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"One's mind, once stretched by a new idea, never regains its original dimensions." Oliver Wendell Holmes
"To be great is to be misunderstood." Ralph Waldo Emerson
"There must be cake, and it must groove." Jay C. Rees
:iconlaughingscarecrow:
No problem. :) You're very welcome.

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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
:iconlaughingscarecrow:
No problem, it's a great shot.

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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
:icontehwanderer:
Thanks very much for the favourite, i'd really love to know which words you don't think are needed, i'm always up for constructive critical-ness (:

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Rock and Roll.
:iconlaughingscarecrow:
All right, let's see...

The first thing that bothered me was the "c'mon, lets just not be coy"
It seems poorly structured, I think it's the "just" that's really bothering me.
And to be entirely honest I'm not a HUGE fan of the stanza right after that, especially the second line.

If it were me I'd get rid of "the way" in the 1st line of the 4th stanza and "can" in the 2nd line of that stanza.

The last things I'd do was get rid of the "we think therefore we are but" and just leave it as "was it all in our heads?"
and then get rid of the "though" in the next line.

Do keep in mind that I tend to cut out about half of every poem I write. I'm a big fan of using the least ammount of words pssible to convey the same meaning. :) If that's not your style I completely understand.

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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
:icontehwanderer:
Thanks for saying, i really appreciate your honesty. yeah i think you may be right about that whole thing, thanks a lot for your input... really.

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Rock and Roll.
:iconlaughingscarecrow:
It's always a pleasure to talk to/help a fellow poet. Let me know if you need anything else. :)

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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
:icontehwanderer:
thanks, i tried to take a lot of your stuff on bord (check out the poem now) but yeah... i try not to be immature as a four year old when it comes to criticaly discussing my works, so thanks :)

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Rock and Roll.

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