It's the Arabic that's going to kill me. A presentation on al-Zabba' prut Amr ibn Tharab ibn Hasan ibn 'Adhina ibn al-Samida', given in Arabic and a paper written on Khālid ibn al-Walīd... written in Arabic of course. Maybe I'll do the presentation on Khālid ibn al-Walīd and my paper on Bat-Zabbai... I just can't decide. And then to decide whether I continue Arabic next semester when I already have so many classes I must take like Kinship and Social Orginization, Geoarchaeology, Medical Anthropology, the History of the African Continent and a sociology course and I'd love to get into the Roman Imperial Art History class... oh so many choices... Oh and the Gothic Literature in America course sounds like a riot.









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Conscience is a word that cowards use, devised to keep the strong in awe.
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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
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The twenty-first century is when everything changes. And you gotta be ready.
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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
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emaN-resU... I KNOW I've seen that name somewhere...
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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
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"One's mind, once stretched by a new idea, never regains its original dimensions." Oliver Wendell Holmes
"To be great is to be misunderstood." Ralph Waldo Emerson
"There must be cake, and it must groove." Jay C. Rees
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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
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Rock and Roll.
The first thing that bothered me was the "c'mon, lets just not be coy"
It seems poorly structured, I think it's the "just" that's really bothering me.
And to be entirely honest I'm not a HUGE fan of the stanza right after that, especially the second line.
If it were me I'd get rid of "the way" in the 1st line of the 4th stanza and "can" in the 2nd line of that stanza.
The last things I'd do was get rid of the "we think therefore we are but" and just leave it as "was it all in our heads?"
and then get rid of the "though" in the next line.
Do keep in mind that I tend to cut out about half of every poem I write. I'm a big fan of using the least ammount of words pssible to convey the same meaning.
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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
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Rock and Roll.
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The ScareCrow is no stranger to the strange and obscene...
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Rock and Roll.
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